Foyles/Comica Billboard Panels

Here's my contributions to a comic strip history of Foyles, which is part of the Comica 2012 Festival and is currently being exhibited on giant billboards outside Foyles bookshop on Charing Cross Rd. Also featuring panels by Bryan Talbot, Steven Appleby, Hunt Emerson, Rian Hughes, and loads more talented folks.
Theres' a nice review with more info and pics at Design Week: A comic-strip history of Foyles | We Like | Design Week
..and here's another at Creative Review Creative Review - Foyles becomes a comic strip for Comica

I always find it interesting to check out the working processes of artists, especially when they're dealing with clients and commissions, so I've included my first attempts (below). I had to change a couple of things here and there..see if you can guess why..